Revised College Application Cover Letter

Dear Sir,

I humbly request that you
reconsider my college application
based on the following:

- My mother's heart beats in my chest.
It is immune to econimic shifts.
It beats slowly and with purpose.

- Recently I saw the Pacific for the first time.
I did not hesitate. I charged it;
even though I cannot swim.

- My father's blood surges through my veins.
He placed a piston in my gut that
will not relent. I cannot be tackled.

Yours Truly,
K.nock O.ut